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The figure went death-still. <Audio signatures detected. Activating recording systems...>
 
The figure went death-still. <Audio signatures detected. Activating recording systems...>
  
"...so that's when Karla gives me the whole 'let's just be friends' spiel, a-and I just had to, to get out of the room, you know? I mean, how could she just ''say'' that? After all we did together?"
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"...so that's when Karla gives me the whole 'let's just be friends' spiel, a-and I just had to, to get out of the room, you know? I mean, how could she just -say- that? After all we did together?"
  
 
The second voice grated, its tone rendered harsher by reluctance. "...yeah. Right. Whatever."
 
The second voice grated, its tone rendered harsher by reluctance. "...yeah. Right. Whatever."
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"Hekate," she said, "I swear to god: if you signed up to be my patrol buddy just to tell me about your fucking sex life and how fucking cute the new girl is, I'm going to shoot you. I don't care if I end up in Containment for an entire fucking year, and I don't care if I'm Castigated for the rest of my entire fucking life." She punctuated her rant with jabs from her gun-arm.  
 
"Hekate," she said, "I swear to god: if you signed up to be my patrol buddy just to tell me about your fucking sex life and how fucking cute the new girl is, I'm going to shoot you. I don't care if I end up in Containment for an entire fucking year, and I don't care if I'm Castigated for the rest of my entire fucking life." She punctuated her rant with jabs from her gun-arm.  
  
"So if you say one more ''goddamn'' word about the novitiate's butt, face, or boobs, or start bitching about your empty 'receiver jack', I -will- shoot you. And I will shoot you until I fucking run out ammo." One last jab. "Got it?"
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"So if you say one more -goddamn- word about the novitiate's butt, face, or boobs, or start bitching about your empty 'receiver jack', I -will- shoot you. And I will shoot you until I fucking run out ammo." One last jab. "Got it?"
  
 
"Ok, fine..." grumbled Hekate. "But seriously, I'm not the only one, am I? She's--"
 
"Ok, fine..." grumbled Hekate. "But seriously, I'm not the only one, am I? She's--"
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'Well, this isn't the ''worst'' situation I've ever been in, but it's up there.'
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'Well, this isn't the -worst- situation I've ever been in, but it's up there.'
  
 
Honoka Iwakura found herself crouched behind a low brick wall. She was in a quiet little town--somewhere in Europe, judging from the architecture--whose name she was too distracted to bother remembering. There was dust around her feet, sun in her eyes, and a blocky battle rifle in her fists.  
 
Honoka Iwakura found herself crouched behind a low brick wall. She was in a quiet little town--somewhere in Europe, judging from the architecture--whose name she was too distracted to bother remembering. There was dust around her feet, sun in her eyes, and a blocky battle rifle in her fists.  
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What do I do? She thought. What do I do? What do I do?
 
What do I do? She thought. What do I do? What do I do?
  
''What do I do?''
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-What do I do?-
  
 
Instinct decided for her. Vindicare training, beaten into her over the course of four brutal years of killing gangsters and Witches alike, sent her blurring into action. She tore a frag grenade from her pouch and tossed it out the door. Its pin remained unremoved--the grenade was just a decoy, to get the soldiers to hesitate while she made a run for the stairs.  
 
Instinct decided for her. Vindicare training, beaten into her over the course of four brutal years of killing gangsters and Witches alike, sent her blurring into action. She tore a frag grenade from her pouch and tossed it out the door. Its pin remained unremoved--the grenade was just a decoy, to get the soldiers to hesitate while she made a run for the stairs.  

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