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{{Infobox Thread
| threadnumber = Thread 4
| link = [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19579302/ Magical Girl Noir Quest 4]
| date = 22 June 2012
| title = Iori Minase II
| previous = [[Thread 3|Thread 3]]
| next = [[Thread 5|Thread 5]]
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A painfully sober and slightly amnesiac magical girl with minty fresh breath secures the room and things go badly from there.

==Appearing Characters==

[[Chiaki Matsuda|Chiaki]], [[Iori Minase|Iori]], Yayoi, Faust

==Summary==

Chiaki arrives at the hotel and notes to herself that security is sparse, finding no traces of any guards at the entrance or elevators. She takes one of the elevators up to the penthouse floor, where she is supposed to report in, and finds that the entire corridor leading up to the penthouse suite is guarded by men in black suits. One of the guards steps up to Chiaki and orders her to leave immediately. Chiaki somehow manages to maintain her self-control and hands the guard over the contract papers identifying her as Iori Minase's personal bodyguard. The guard checks the papers carefully and let's Chiaki pass, stating that they're in high alert and taking the threat to Iori's life seriously.

Scoffing at this comment, Chiaki tells the guard that if they were really taking it seriously then they would have locked the hotel down tighter. The guard bristles at these comments and tells Chiaki that adding guards on the lobby would just attract attention so they decided to concentrate their efforts by guarding the penthouse floor only instead. Chiaki, however, is having none of it and slams the guard into the elevator doors behind her while insisting that security be tightened across the hotel. The guard, in pain from nearly having his arm twisted, agrees to call in another team. Chiaki, now satisfied, pulls the guard back up on his feet and gives him a cigarette and a smile before heading to the idol's suite.

Knocking on the door, Chiaki receives no reply and begins to think that the room might already be compromised. Shoving the door open, she cases the room and notices Iori coming out of the bathroom, clothed only in a towel. The idol regards Chiaki with an icy expression of distaste and calls for guards to remove "'''this pungent little urchin'''" from her suite. Chiaki, despite feeling annoyed at this attitude, once again manages to maintain her self-control, closing the door before properly introducing herself to her client. Iori is not impressed but decides that Chiaki looks capable enough, telling her that she will not tolerate smoking in her room and that she should make use of the bathroom as she stinks. Feeling increasingly annoyed, Chiaki declines and states that she's not here to make Iori comfortable but to protect her from rapists. Iori, on the other hand, orders Chiaki to at least brush her teeth, to which Chiaki agrees in order to avoid a screaming match. Looking around the bathroom as she brushes her teeth, Chiaki notices that Iori is not very tidy as she'd left some used panties on the floor. She briefly considers stealing them and selling them for painkillers before berating herself and leaving the bathroom.

Back in the hotel suite, Iori asks Chiaki if the reason she's here is because her superiors fear that she might also be raped as Yayoi Takatsuki was. In a rare show of concern, Chiaki attempts to reassure her and calm the younger girl as she searches through the room. Iori calms down slightly and thanks Chiaki for her concern. Continuing the conversation to distract herself from her parched throat, Chiaki asks about Yayoi. Iori seems to hesitate for a moment before describing how her friend used to be someone who loved everyone but changed drastically after her attack. Iori starts crying and Chiaki apologizes, handing her a box of tissues to clean her face up with. Iori thanks her, surprised at her kindness, and apologizes for being so harsh on her initially, stating that she already had to fire three guards for trying to steal her panties. Hearing this, Chiaki replies in a deadpan joke which seems to alleviate Iori's mood and makes her laugh.

A knock on the door interrupts the moment and one of the guards announces a surprise visitor, identifying herself as Yayoi Takatsuki. Iori confirms that they had talked about visitng each other one last time before her trip to America and asks for Chiaki to please let her in...

==Trivia==
*At this point, Chiaki doesn't remember the name of Kyubey's agency. [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19567167]
*Chiaki avoids introducing herself as a Magical Girl because they're still mostly an urban legend.[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19567423]
*First time that someone takes a dig at Chiaki's height. [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19567423]
*Iori's sleep wear is described as "an outfit girls of her age should probably not be wearing". [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19567699]
*Chiaki suddenly remembers how at one time seeing others cry would reduce her to tears as well, but things have changed since then [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19569061]
*Chiaki is more annoyed that the guards got caught stealing panties than by the fact that they stole them to begin with [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19569464]

==Associated Illustrations==

<gallery>
File:Thread 3 img1 queststart2.png|Thread Opener
File:Thread 3 img2 jimmiesrustlinggently.png|Chiaki is displeased at a security mook
File:Thread 3 img3 ioriblank.png|Meeting Iori Minase
</gallery>

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 Suddenly, Chiaki doesn't need coffee anymore.
-Quickly checking her surroundings, Chiaki makes sure that Iori is still asleep in the bed and that her time-stop is working properly. Everything is in order, except for the black-eyed apparition beckoning her to come close. Canceling her time-stop ability, the pink-haired girl disappears and Chiaki heads back to her chair, no longer feeling sleeping. Once again aware of just how tired she really feels, she hears a beep announcing that a text message has just been received. The message reads:
+Quickly checking her surroundings, Chiaki makes sure that Iori is still asleep in the bed and that her time-stop is working properly. Everything is in order, except for the black-eyed apparition beckoning her to come close. Canceling her time-stop ability, the pink-haired girl disappears and Chiaki heads back to her chair, no longer feeling sleepy. Once again aware of just how tired she really feels, she hears a beep announcing that a text message has just been received. The message reads:
 '''"Wake up."''''
-Feeling annoyed at the cryptic passive-aggresive message, Chiaki calls the number back and what she hears is something unexpected: a female voice screaming for help, high pitched laughter and high caliber gunshots. After a moment, the line goes dead and Chiaki notices that a stark naked Yayoi is standing before her...
+Feeling annoyed at the cryptic passive-aggresive message, Chiaki calls the number back and what she hears is something unexpected: a female voice screaming for help, high pitched laughter and high caliber gunshots. After a moment, the line goes dead and Chiaki notices that a stark naked Yayoi is standing before her. Murmuring Iori's name, she clambers unto Chiaki's lap while she's too stunned to react...
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 Leaving the girls alone, Chiaki heads towards the door and asks for the guard standing outside to give her a headset. The guard initially smirks at her but hands her his own headset after receiving a murderous glare. Chiaki snatches it out of his grasp and slams the door shut on his face, earning herself another glare from Iori. Ignoring the idol, the bespectacled girl unfolds the headset and listens in on the patrol banter. Satisfied after a few moments, she looks back towards the bed and notices that her principal is getting... busy... under the sheets. She decides to give them as much privacy as possible, standing near the door and waiting for them to fall asleep. Once finished, she heads towards a chair near the bedside, feeling slightly jealous. Chiaki almost immediately finds that the chair is almost too comfortable and, fearing that she might fall asleep, decides to send Mami a text message to keep herself occupied.
 ==Trivia==
 *Chiaki has a low opinion of idols considering them to be "vapid, hypersexualized pop icons that exemplify everything that is wrong with today's society" [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19579302/#p19579486]
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 '''"Get out of my room, Matsuda-san."'''
 Refusing the idol's command, Chiaki once again states that she's not here to make her happy but to keep her safe. Iori, still angry, manages to regain control of her temper and accuses Chiaki of not treating her like a human being. The idol states that Chiaki may remain in the room to earn her paycheck, but that she'd better not be around in the morning - Chiaki's services wont be needed for protecting her until her flight's departure. Iori promises to call Kyubey in the morning to have another agent sent and summarily dismisses Chiaki to a far corner of the room, away from herself and Yayoi. Chiaki once again refuses Iori's orders, stating that the apology is the only concession that she'll be getting out of her - bedside watch is going to happen no matter  what Iori wants and that she'd better learn to ignore Chiaki's presence. Iori replies that she pities Chiaki because she's allowed herself to become a person that can't even understand why others are angry at her. She doesn't know if she should be more frightened of the otaku rapists threatening her life or the girl that she's paying to protect it. Relenting, Iori says that Chiaki should stand watch on her side of the bed as she doesn't want the bespectacled girl anywhere near Yayoi.
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		+	<gallery>
		+	File:Thread 3 img1 queststart2.png\|Thread Opener
		+	File:Thread 4 img2 jimmiesunrustled.png\|Chiaki's patience with Iori is sorely tested
		+	File:Thread 4 img3 iorishouting.png\|Iori loses her patience with Chiaki
		+	File:Thread 4 img4 ioriirritated.png\|Iori is irritated by Chiaki's lack of tact
		+	File:Thread 2 img10 unknownbueno.png\|Oh no, she's back! Aaaah!
		+	</gallery>

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−	~~<gallery>~~
−	~~File:Thread 3 img1 queststart2.png\|Thread Opener~~
−	~~File:Thread 3 img2 jimmiesrustlinggently.png\|Chiaki is displeased at a security mook~~
−	~~File:Thread 3 img3 ioriblank.png\|Meeting Iori Minase~~
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	==Trivia==		==Trivia==
−	*At this point, Chiaki doesn't remember the name of Kyubey's agency. [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19567167]
−	*Chiaki avoids introducing herself as a Magical Girl because they're still mostly an urban legend.[http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19567423]
−	*First time that someone takes a dig at Chiaki's height. [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19567423]
−	*Iori's sleep wear is described as "an outfit girls of her age should probably not be wearing". [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19567699]
−	*Chiaki suddenly remembers how at one time seeing others cry would reduce her to tears as well, but things have changed since then [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19569061]
−	*Chiaki is more annoyed that the guards got caught stealing panties than by the fact that they stole them to begin with [http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19566127/#p19569464]

	==Associated Illustrations==		==Associated Illustrations==

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 ==Summary==
-Chiaki arrives at the hotel and notes to herself that security is sparse, finding no traces of any guards at the entrance or elevators. She takes one of the elevators up to the penthouse floor, where she is supposed to report in, and finds that the entire corridor leading up to the penthouse suite is guarded by men in black suits. One of the guards steps up to Chiaki and orders her to leave immediately. Chiaki somehow manages to maintain her self-control and hands the guard over the contract papers identifying her as Iori Minase's personal bodyguard. The guard checks the papers carefully and let's Chiaki pass, stating that they're in high alert and taking the threat to Iori's life seriously.
+Chiaki, once again in a bad mood, thinks to herself that she really is much too sober for this assignment and gets ready to deny entry. However, Iori pleads insistently before Chiaki can voice any arguments about compromising security, saying that her friend is completely harmless and afraid of everyone since her attack. Placing a dainty hand on Chiaki’s scarred Shield, Iori begs her to please not think ill of her friend.
-Scoffing at this comment, Chiaki tells the guard that if they were really taking it seriously then they would have locked the hotel down tighter. The guard bristles at these comments and tells Chiaki that adding guards on the lobby would just attract attention so they decided to concentrate their efforts by guarding the penthouse floor only instead. Chiaki, however, is having none of it and slams the guard into the elevator doors behind her while insisting that security be tightened across the hotel. The guard, in pain from nearly having his arm twisted, agrees to call in another team. Chiaki, now satisfied, pulls the guard back up on his feet and gives him a cigarette and a smile before heading to the idol's suite.
+Chiaki relents and orders Iori to stand behind her while she confirms the situation outside the door, warning the idol that she’ll let her friend in but that she shouldn’t expect more from her. Iori thanks her and stands aside as Chiaki opens the door slightly. Everything is normal outside, the guards are standing at their posts and the hulking guard that Chiaki had previously roughed up is escorting Yayoi. Chiaki remarks to herself how tiny the auburn haired girl looks standing next to the muscular guard; a haunted and tired shadow of her former self. She opens the door further to allow entry. Yayoi is alarmed at the sight of Chiaki while the guard scowls at her. Chiaki points at the idol and waves her in. Yayoi looks up at the guard uncertainly before stepping forward gingerly, cautiously at which point Chiaki loses her patience and grabs the girl roughly by the wrist, nearly making her cry, and yanks her into the room as she slams the door.
-Knocking on the door, Chiaki receives no reply and begins to think that the room might already be compromised. Shoving the door open, she cases the room and notices Iori coming out of the bathroom, clothed only in a towel. The idol regards Chiaki with an icy expression of distaste and calls for guards to remove "'''this pungent little urchin'''" from her suite. Chiaki, despite feeling annoyed at this attitude, once again manages to maintain her self-control, closing the door before properly introducing herself to her client. Iori is not impressed but decides that Chiaki looks capable enough, telling her that she will not tolerate smoking in her room and that she should make use of the bathroom as she stinks. Feeling increasingly annoyed, Chiaki declines and states that she's not here to make Iori comfortable but to protect her from rapists. Iori, on the other hand, orders Chiaki to at least brush her teeth, to which Chiaki agrees in order to avoid a screaming match. Looking around the bathroom as she brushes her teeth, Chiaki notices that Iori is not very tidy as she'd left some used panties on the floor. She briefly considers stealing them and selling them for painkillers before berating herself and leaving the bathroom.
+Yayoi nearly stumbles over her feet as she’s dragged into the room, crying out in fear and surprise. Iori protests that Chiaki is hurting her friend, but the black-haired girl is focused on patting down the room’s newest guest, searching her for weapons. Chiaki is so focused on her job that she does not notice Iori walking up to her until she feels the stinging slap on her cheek. Iori is screaming now, taking the crying and terrified Yayoi into her arms, as she berates Chiaki for going back on what they had agreed on.
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