Magical Juggernaut Heather Crunch versus Formula H - Revision history

Attarou: doesn't need title at top

2015-04-01T20:34:43Z

doesn't need title at top

2015-04-01T20:34:05Z

the to they

2015-04-01T19:38:36Z

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2015-04-01T14:59:00Z

I'm going to hell for this and I'm taking everyone with me

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	“What if, hypothetically, you ingested an INSIDIOUS CONCOCTION that gave you an… an extra appendage?”		“What if, hypothetically, you ingested an INSIDIOUS CONCOCTION that gave you an… an extra appendage?”

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 HA! PERFECTLY EXECUTED SPIT-TAKE BY NAKAJIMA! All are once again shocked, SHOCKED at my words! SCRUTINIZING me as though I would say JUST KIDDING or something, but they only find my WINNING SMILE!
-So INSTEAD the look to the recovering Nakajima, who’s wiping down her face and no doubt hiding her HUMILIATION! Finally, she flatly says, "Haha, what." Trying to laugh off my words.
+So INSTEAD they look to the recovering Nakajima, who’s wiping down her face and no doubt hiding her HUMILIATION! Finally, she flatly says, "Haha, what." Trying to laugh off my words.
 I shake my head, my CERTAIN WILL –RESOLUTE-! "No, really! I'd JAM it in your butt!” I assure her. “Because it'd almost -certainly- be your FAULT somehow!"

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 “Busteeeeed,” taunts Nakajima towards the guilty Soul Temperer. The guilty Soul Temperer caught RED-HANDED trying to add Formula H to my drink!
- “I really expected better from you,” I scold the Soul Temperer. I’m scowling at her so hard it’s starting to hurt.
+“I really expected better from you,” I scold the Soul Temperer. I’m scowling at her so hard it’s starting to hurt.
 “I am sorry, Seeker of Enlightenment,” says a stone-faced Soul Temperer. “Are you going to punish me for it?” She’s not doing a good job of hiding her enthusiasm at –all-!